In Monday's ARW class, I read the essay about the death penalty in America.
With reading that essay, I learned a lot of things such as how to use citation.
That seems to be very difficult, because though that essay seems to be very good for me, that have some problems.
After taking that lecture, I think I should use citation more correctly and have to write my essay more logically.
It's not a bad essay but there is always room for improvement. I'm glad you enjoyed analyzing for the improvements that needed.
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